war-spawn 2007-11-20 19:42:22

I stand by my review before. Best punchline is the N-Gage one, and it still ain't that hot. And maybe if Lejin didn't have so much to say, I'd fall back. And dude blocked me, so whatever he's in, I know he's gonna be bound to see it sooner or later. So I get as much words in as possible. I know he's bound to feel it, and come back with his same old words against me. Dude ain't original. lol

war-spawn 2007-11-20 20:42:14

"Ignore the haters BN. PoorPawn is on your dick right now thats why he got no life sits at his momma home all day on fucking NG broke as hell thinking hes a Gansta typing some triple triple OG shit on reviews...LMFAO"

Just so Lejin can see this too,

I'm 17 years old. He expects me to live somewhere else? He's a fucking idiot. How old is the mother fucker? Like 30 somethin? And you know me BN, I keep it real no matter what. Beef or not. It's funny how I was looking at some of Lejin's first reviews to ya tracks telling you to hang up your mic, and how much you sucked. Now, I see that you two are bestest of friends. And just so you know, I gave ya track a 2, not an 0. Big difference in score.

PhadedSoldier 2007-11-23 02:17:19

Spawn dropped a harsh review there. Some lines aight, but Ima stick to what I said. Get ya flow starting, and then start adding the lyrics. Dedicate yourself to a song and make it sound like its connecting. Play the shit loud so you can feel what your saying, not say what you think sounds good with what you hear. Ill admit I dont even dedicate myself enough to my shit. But yeah, A-Gang, whatever you rep, thats your bullshit calls. And the weed, thats ya problem as well. My lungs are to valuable to me for that shit. So yeah, ya words connect and make sense, but at the same time, your putting too much into it. Like the clones shit, had I not read the review I wouldnt known shit about the 3 identities. Easier said than done, but its easier just to choose the right way instead of riding with fuckheads that say they can protect you. I mean, they are alright sometimes, Lejin is cool when we arent shooting back and forth at each other. Kaliba, never talked to him, but whenever I told him about his song, he talked back without trying to burn me so yeah.

Like I said, "Flowetry" isnt what you want in rap, but it is what can turn into rap.
Punches are good and all, but without any flow, you just end up slaughtering the track with staggered words.
You can beef us all you want... Lmao, this is just some bomb beef that is back and forth like pong.
You played off my last review, shit, youll probably do the same to this one.
Just speaking what I thought, giving you a little structure.
You drop it, thats you. You take it, thats still you.

In words you might understand
"The fattest blunt can have the nastiest weed"... But just a bit of the best stuff works so much better.

-Phade
New Era

InGenius 2007-11-24 08:40:13

Seriously, dawg, you gotta step your game up. Even your newest and, by your words, best tracks, have serious stutter problems.

"NY Assassination"

Many hustlers in NY,
Got a scowl on they face,
But none are king.
Tryin' to see the throne,
Like hungry dogs,
Chewin' on they bone...

6 lines, one rhyme. No alliteration. No substance. And you stuttered over half the lines. I respect anyone for tracking their vocals and jumping into the game, but if your track deserves a 1 or 2, it gets a 1 or 2. We all put in the work and heard the critics thrash our shit when we started out, you ain't gonna be different.

Keep it up and you'll get there. Just don't buy into all of the hype. Lejin's sound is unpolished and he talks in third person like he's somebody major? Don't go that route, it's food quality bs. He's going to get ate up by real undergrounders, especially in NY's scene. This game don't forgive cocky talk without walk.

Peace

Lejin 2007-11-24 16:13:46

Lol looks like poorpawn bin busy getting all the haters he can get to help him in his time of need XD Keyboard ganster !

TheEyeOfMusiK 2007-11-24 16:25:07

Ingenius is speaking the truth.. your going to get ripped apart if you keep it up.. matter fact, you are.. either way you put it.

"This game don't forgive cocky talk without walk."

Everyone knows you can't take me.. flow or no flow. You don't got me. I'm multi-talented, I got you in producing (IF U EVEN MAKE A BEAT) and rapping. N not much people do that and come out good. You was spared the first time, when reven was telling me you wasn't worth it and you begged him not to hop on my track, say I was enough on your mind. Now I'm going straight after all of ya'll.
To tell you the truth BN.. at your current rapping skill. Your not even in the condition to beef with experienced rappers, your in the condition to go to the experienced rappers and get training and help. Your not even a rapper. Your a "poet". Even if you are from NY. stop reppin' it. Cuz your making it look bad. When we think about NY, we think about very lyrical rappers with flow like:
-Saigon
-Tupac
-Jadakiss
-Twalib Kweli
-ETC.

And the difference between you and these rappers (even some on ng) is THEY GOT FLOW. No ones respect rappers with no flow. If you was "from the hood" or known "real n***az" you would be a laughing stock. But instead, you go on NG, which 70% of the people on NG are Nerds and try to get attention from them. And to them of course you will, all you need is a good beat to back up your "no-flow rapping" and they'll like it. They will like anything that they can relate with. Like starwars, video games, and some stupid shit. This is straight up REAL TALK. And you'll soon see enough for messing with RMP.

When you say fuck RMP.
You basically said:
-Fuck War-Spawn
-Fuck DJ SES
-Fuck CaliberTheButcher
-Fuck DJ Nitemare
-Fuck PhadedSoldier

So if you said fuck us, then you gotta deal with all of us.
You should of been specific with who your dissing instead of saying fuck the gang. Even Lejin knows I'm better than you, I got proof for the message he sent me when I dissed you. Your in trouble now man. I almost feel bad for you.

-RMP

InGenius 2007-11-25 00:48:03

I ain't here to help war-spawn. He definitely doesn't need my help and it's hilarious that Lejin would think so. It's simple, really. I want anyone who spits game to realize that if they are running with a crew that's holding them back or fluffing their talent up and not giving them real feedback, they are going to get eaten. It's obvious anyone idolizing Lejin's sound is on the path straight to the nearest McDonald's, freestyling about Warcraft on the burger mic.

B-N, I listened to all of your 2007 jams. It's all the same thing. I picked "NY Assassination" because of it's stutters, but I could easily have picked out "Nobody respects You", which you lined out above. You fell all over that one.

You wanna pick out my work from 6 months ago, you're right, it ain't up to the par or the goals I set for myself now. Which is why I ain't producin' much until I get my new equipment. 6 months ago I wasn't doing anything. 12 months ago, I was in a studio in Texas. Now I'm in Alaska. I gotta build my own studio from the bottom up, but the difference is I ain't talking about myself in the third person like your idol. I ain't recording on a computer mic, talking about GM's and online gaming to get 5's out of all of the audio portal critics who post the "I don't really like hip-hop, but you are teh awesomeness" reviews. I don't lower my flow to that level to get the vote.

Keep on doing what you do, improve, practice, and don't ever talk about yourself in the third person. Respect gets fans, disrespect gets enemies.

Peace

TheEyeOfMusiK 2007-11-25 01:49:05

Thanks for the 0 bomb to my account and the RMP account. It doesn't make a difference. You may have a more experience "NG Level" than me (lol) but im a more experienced rapper/producer and it shows.

TheEyeOfMusiK 2007-11-25 02:24:17

LMAO!! SHUT DAT ISH UP!!! (dont wanna curse cuz you'll report me for inappropriate wording)LMAO!! LOOK!!! notice.. most my songs is +100 votes or even 200. So if a regular 1-10 level'd guy 0's it.. it will only go down by 1. But the thing iz.. wut happened to my song that was 4.25 that went down to 4.18 all in 1 vote?? "who ever" down voted it must had a level higher than "15". and the fact that right when you responced to my first comment i left you.. thats when all my songs, even the songs on the RMP account get 0'd in the same time range. So please shut da fluck up and dont lie.. if u caught.. ur caught. Crist.. you are so fake.. i'm surprised you survive in NG.. you must suck dick for studio time.

TheEyeOfMusiK 2007-11-25 02:38:43

LMAO!!! STOP LYING TO INGENIUS!!!!!!!! YOUR IDOL IS WAR-SPAWN!!!!! LMAO HERES SOME PROOF THAT WILL FRESHIN' UP YO MEMORY

BN!!! Y U LYING SO MUCH?? HUH!?!?! LMAO YOUR SO FAKE!!! I SEE Y U RIDE WIT THEM LOSERS.. you just like them. Your a snake, you lie, and you let ur ego get you pwned!!!

Aim Conversation with BrokenNeedle and Warspawn:
LyricalVisionary (11:49:28 PM): You was like my #1 fan
brokenneedle25 (11:50:54 PM): yen then u dissme

TheEyeOfMusiK 2007-11-25 14:22:28

LMAO.. with 200 votes?? it will go down alot?? no it won't, so think before you type u dumbshit.. and lol.. he has no excuse for 0ing my music so he blames me. Stop lying and stop using weed as an excuse for everything. Wigga I dun weed and it doesnt fuck me up. I go to school high. Because being high makes you more focus on to shit (something you won't know cuz ur a lil white boi who thinks hes out the ghetto of NY tryin to act like u a big bad boi on the internet). Fuck you, i'm done with this.. I'll let my music speak for me.

TheEyeOfMusiK 2007-11-25 19:38:24

lol.. theres no trouble.. just waitin for caliber to finish hiz verse.. (^_-)

FxcknBie 2007-11-27 00:51:16

Racoon..LMFAO. Ah god, I'm still wondering if the dude was drunk when naming himself that.

Lejin 2007-11-27 22:56:20

Wow look at all the keyboard gansters in action against BN... oooooh scary XD

Yeah Butcher dropped his verse aimed at some bozo talking shit about him on a mixtape. Thats ma n***a he came forward and let me know himself despite how busy he is.

Loving the keyboard ganster action you got goin on in BN's page you kids doin here. lmfao XD

TheEyeOfMusiK 2007-11-27 23:52:29

LMAO @ FUCKING LEJIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO!!! U SOUND LIKE A PUSSY RIT NOW LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WIGGA!!!! ME N CALIBER IZ DOWN LIKE FUCK.. IF CALIBER DONT LIKE SUM1.. I DUNT LIKE THEM.. IF I DUNT LIKE SUM1.. CALIBER WONT LIKE THEM. AND I SURE AS HELL DONT LIKE U SO WHY DO U THINK UR SAFE?? LMAO!! WE ALREADY ENDED U NASTY!!! ALL U GOT IZ 2 FANS N SHITLOAD OF FAKE ACCOUNTS ROFL!! AND FOR BN.. "ROFL x10000000" LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!! LMAO HIM N SERAPHIK IZ BROTHERS.. BUT WEN I DROP A SIK ASS PUNCHLINE WHICH DOUBLE DISSES BOTH OF EM.. THEY CLAIM THEY AINT BROTHERS ANYMORE!!! LMAO YA'LL WIGGAZ IZ SO FAKE LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!

Lejin 2007-11-28 01:26:13

Careful Lu he might hit you off with some og status keyboard threats!!! LMFAO!

G-Styles 2007-11-28 11:44:14

New Beat out : <a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/108443">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/108443</a>

FxcknBie 2007-11-30 23:43:11

Oh my god..that beat was sick. As in it got cancer along the way in the making. You killed it. It's dead :/ & gross.