Broken-Needle's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Chance]

I am deeply sorry

I am sorry for not responding to your review of U goin' down(remake) and I feel like itis my duty to write you a review.
Now what you gotta do is make it more complex and get some more diversity in there. Get a little better intro, something with a bang andmaybe increase the pace or completely change the beat, not realy sure I'm more of a rapper than a producer but hope I helped.
Thanks for your vote, Broken-Needle! You voted 5 for My Chance, raising its score from 3.33 to 3.75.
I also gave ya a download,
Keep it pimpin'
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Platinum-Chrome responds:

Thaxz mayn

[Yumbo-Yak_Love Long Forgotten.]

I see u been playing around with R&B

This pretty good, keep workin' on R&B u good at it. I think R&B is best with lyrics so this jus needs someone to flow over it. Anyway 5d it,
*Vote or Die*
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Yumbo-Yak responds:

Thanx for da review, home slizzle, keep it pimpin', and let me know when u make da next big hit, u smell me?

[Yumbo-Yak_Toilet Paper]

Lmao

Why the hell do I have to get toilet paper? You're up u go get it. Sleep dam it.
Daz good I just don't like the way you kinda delivered, you're going towards that Dane Cook, who is annoying. Also good Comedians make fun of current events and things people can relate to(what you did). O and also don't be afraid to curse u said mf just say motherfucker. 5d it,
*Vote or Die*
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Yumbo-Yak responds:

to tell u da truth, if i make another one i wont curse in it. I got a nine year old sister, and she likes my music and stuff, so if she wants to hear stuff like this, then i cant be up there cursin', u smell me

[Diamonds In My Mouth *V*O*D*]

dam look at all da reviews

Ya shud've made it longer, iz pretty good, it kinda got annoying cuz i had dat as ma' aim sound but it is good. Oo n check ma' new track, almost dasecond I put it up some1 already zero'd it, anyway 5d it,
Keep it pimpin'
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YoungBreeze responds:

Good Lookin Ontha reviw BN!
Ima Check that track ASAP

Young Preeze Tha Fuckin President
Vote Or Die
Block Burna
BITCH!

[Another Day *NG VER*]

daz 1 hot preview

yo definetely finish dis track, it got real good flo'. Dam son u are now up to da level o sum o da mo' well known artists. Shit son dis 1 sick beat. Thanks for your vote, Broken-Needle! You voted 5 for Another Day *NG VER*, keeping its score at 5.00.
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Bleek989 responds:

haha thx fool yea told yall i was steppin up this year! :) but im cuttin down on the post i thnk...dont kno tho :D

[Yumbo-yak_Short mix]

Shit was good 2 a short mix

It was extremely short but pretty coo'. It wud've been better if ya spent mo' time but w/e. Anyway 5d it,
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Yumbo-Yak responds:

Yah, i know, but i was takin' to long to come up wit a good beat usin' this as a basis, so i just left it like this and posted it

[When Death Becomes You]

da beatis notso good but w/e

Ok I dno exactly da sample but seeing that "Don't be a menace to south central while drinking your juice in the hood" had Loc say that alot and that movie is from da 90's i believe and seeing that u said it's yo favorite movie that would mean the movie is most likely "Boyz n the Hood". Anyway 5d it,
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Platinum-Chrome responds:

thaxs mayn u real coo wit me dawg

[My Balls]

lmao, u stole ma' idea

lmfao, i was gonna make fun o fergalicious with ma' balls too, lmao. Ya' beat me 2 it, lol. Well anyway back 2 reviewin' Aight so wut cha' gotta do is give ya a little mo' emotion, also it wud sound realy good if ya got a girl to say "ya balls" o smtin like that. Also too bad it got cut off, but w/e. Anyway 5d it,
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GhostMob responds:

Word son a girl on there would be hot
But i was just foolin around and i made it in liek 10 min it was a freestlye kind of track no writing juss stopin then recordin
Thanks for the review
Be easy

PEACE

[-Dirty_South_To_The_East_]

it was ok

not realy 1 o ya best, I like da piano, butdidn't like da thingdat was in da beggining cuz it juskeptgoin n got annoying, also da "What?" an' da "Hey!" got repetitive, well anyway Thanks for your vote, Broken-Needle! You voted 5 for -Dirty_South_To_The_East_, raising its score from 2.50 to 3.33.
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Dice-Train-808 responds:

Thanks. I didn't like the thing that was at the beginning either but I couldn't fix it ...something gay happened to FL so damn lol. Thanks for lookin out on the 5!

D!CeTrA!n8o8 ~$~

[To The Grave.]

solid

dam dat shit iz hott, sounds very well done, it felt like a loop tho daz da only reason y I didn't download it, otherwise I'd definetely dowload it, actualy I'll download it anyway, well 5d it + download,
Keep it pimpin'
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DJ-Cobb responds:

Thx BN keep it pimpin
>>**cobb**<<